Q8 · Bài luận nêu quan điểm (template + bài mẫu + 15 đề)

1. Phân bổ 30 phút

Thời gian	Việc
0–4'	Chọn phe, ghi dàn ý: 2 lý do + 2 ví dụ
4–7'	Mở bài (40–50 từ)
7‒16'	Thân bài 1 (100–110 từ)
16‒25'	Thân bài 2 (100–110 từ)
25‒27'	Kết luận (40–50 từ)
27‒30'	Đọc lại: chính tả, s/es, thì, mạo từ

2. Template 4 đoạn

3. Kho cụm từ nâng điểm

Chức năng	Cụm từ
Nêu quan điểm	I strongly believe that … · From my point of view, … · I am convinced that …
Thêm ý	In addition, … · Furthermore, … · Moreover, … · Not only … but also …
Ví dụ	For example, … · For instance, … · A good example of this is … · In my own experience, …
Nguyên nhân – kết quả	This is because … · As a result, … · Consequently, … · This allows people to …
Nhượng bộ	Admittedly, … However, … · Although some people argue that …, …
Kết luận	In conclusion, … · To sum up, … · For these reasons, …

4. Bài mẫu (≈ 330 từ)

Đề: Some people believe employees should be allowed to work from home. Others think they should work in the office. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In today's world, more and more companies are allowing their employees to work remotely. While working in an office has some advantages, I strongly believe that employees should be allowed to work from home. There are two main reasons for my opinion: it saves time and money, and it improves productivity.
First of all, working from home helps employees save a great deal of time and money. In big cities like Ho Chi Minh City, many people spend more than an hour every day commuting in heavy traffic. This time could be used for more meaningful activities, such as exercising, studying, or spending time with family. For example, my cousin used to spend nearly two hours a day traveling to her office. Since her company introduced a remote work policy, she has used that time to take an online English course, and she recently passed an important certification exam. In addition, employees who work from home do not have to pay for fuel, parking, or expensive lunches near the office.
Second, many people are actually more productive at home. Offices are often noisy, and employees are frequently interrupted by phone calls, unnecessary meetings, or conversations with coworkers. At home, people can create a quiet environment and organize their schedules in a way that suits them best. For instance, when I worked on a large report last year, I completed it at home in two days, while I had expected it to take a whole week at the office. Furthermore, modern technology such as video conferencing and cloud storage allows team members to communicate and share documents easily, so working remotely rarely causes problems.
In conclusion, I believe that allowing employees to work from home benefits both workers and companies. It saves employees time and money, and it helps them work more efficiently. Therefore, I think more companies should give their staff the option to work remotely.

5. 15 đề luyện (2 bài/tuần từ Tuần 7)

6. ✍️ Bài làm của tôi

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7. Tự chấm

≥ 300 từ, 4 đoạn
Quan điểm rõ ngay mở bài
Mỗi lý do có ví dụ cụ thể (người, thời gian, kết quả)
≥ 5 từ nối khác nhau
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